It's really well done. only problem i have with it is that the sound isn't synced properly. Try using the stream sync option if you haven't already.
oke thx for the tip
It's kinda funny to see something educational on NG, but that's not a bad thing. I like it. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.
I am not alone. ShrimpFryRice has some and I know a few language tuts. Maybe this could be the subject of an article too! If you think of a fairly simple documentary idea, let me know and we could collab, with the help of the Dragons & Spirits. There's more on the way!
You show talent
While you do show great talent with this Flash, I'm not quite sure what the point of your cartoon is. I would make it longer, and include the basic components of a story. Shorts are fine, but you can't ignore the story just because you're making one.
But other than that, the graphics are great.
Good, but really not the best
It's good to see a drama become this popular on NG. This is an awesome concept, and it's easy to see how much you guys really care about and put into this project. However, some of the writing gets a bit slow. Like, ok, I get it, his heart is a dustless mirror. Ok. Overall, I really like this, and can't wait to see more. I'd just recommend a little work on the writing. Take out anything that isn't necessary to the story, everything should be essential to understanding the characters as actual complex people and the story as an actual complex situation. No wasted words allowed ;-P.
Great job. Good luck with the rest of it.
Although it's really been done before, I think this still shows talent. The blue gradient for the sky was well used, and the setup of the stage was pretty nice (could have been better though, some spikes or something maybe). The animation itself was pretty smooth. The sound was great. Good job on the music. Next time you use some of your own music, I reccomend you put it into the AP and use a credits link to it. You'll get more downloads and reviews that way. I haven't checked out your other work yet, but I hope you do some more complex and original stuff in the future.
wtf? constructive critisisim? don't get that every day. thanks :p
The art is amazing, and the story is intriguing. I can't wait until more of the story is revealed in the next episode. Most of the animation is smooth, although the throat-slit could have been enhanced, but it wasn't bad. It's great to see you doing something this good.
Can't wait to see more.
Well thanks, I feel it's one of the best animations I've ever done (and finished...LoL...). Your comments are well-recieved and appreciated. ;)
really not worth anything
there's not much animation, the art is... bad. One of the things that really bugs me is when it is made blatantly obvioous how little the author put into it. At one point the corner of the pic of the monster is revealed, which aggrivates my pet-peeve. I like the concept actually. I think that if it were taken today and a good artist put a lot of effort into it, it could be good, as long as it is done in a way in which it will be taken symbolically that is.
not that funny
the dildo jokes were funny the first time. You pretty much just used the same exact joke the original did. The art isn't horrendous, but not too interesting. That sound the buttons make gets annoying too.
nothing too fantastic
there's really not much to like in thi one. It's an ok concept, not really any original art by the author, and basic tweens were all the appearant animation (except for his cape in the beginning).
while this was a cute concept I suppose, and I did like the drawing of the monopoly guy, there was no mouth movement, minimal animation, and the sound didn't seem to match up completely. I know that this was submitted a long time ago, but even for then, this wasn't as good as it could have been.
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