Good Job
It's kinda funny to see something educational on NG, but that's not a bad thing. I like it. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.
xxx V
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Good Job
It's kinda funny to see something educational on NG, but that's not a bad thing. I like it. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.
xxx V
Hi V,
I am not alone. ShrimpFryRice has some and I know a few language tuts. Maybe this could be the subject of an article too! If you think of a fairly simple documentary idea, let me know and we could collab, with the help of the Dragons & Spirits. There's more on the way!
You show talent
While you do show great talent with this Flash, I'm not quite sure what the point of your cartoon is. I would make it longer, and include the basic components of a story. Shorts are fine, but you can't ignore the story just because you're making one.
But other than that, the graphics are great.
awesome
The first game with a boss and a point. Too bad you didn't submit anything else. I love that the user is able to switch weapons. Even these days this game would be saved.
Not much
It's kinda funny, but it might be nice to make the rats move around a little and make the mouse movement smoother (no punn intended). The art style is nice and I'd love to see you use it for an animation (if you take your time and make the animation itself nice).
Good job.
yea... but if they mioved around, wouldnt it be very hard to hit them? they are so small...
Thanks:D
not mucch
this isn't much, not really any point. No obvious scoring system, not much variety or anything along those lines. But it's so early in NG submission history that we've got to give it some props.
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