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It was ok

The graphics were great, and so was the sound, (I'm surprised by the file size, but I guess it's b/c the animation was pretty simple). I think the one thing you should work on is timing. Not like timing the sound, that was fine, but the pacing of the movie/toon was just a bit slow. You could have cut down on the time between each pass across the screen. But it was an awesome idea. Why don't you have any other submissions yet? You're good. Keep up the good work.

pretty darn good

I think the best part about this is the graphics. The actual animation wasn't much, but the drawing was excellent. The music wasn't too bad either.

Wow!

It was great. I love that whole story told w/ just pictures and music thing. I like the squigly animation style, but i think that this was a bit too squigly, it became a bit unsettling, but then again, i think thats kind of the effect you were looking for with the movie in general.

I'm gonna go check out your other stuff now! I hope you get a site soon, I'd definately check it out.

its the only...

...preview i haven't blammed yet. really looking forward to the actual project.

although i am niether clock, nor clock fan...

I hate to say that this movie isn't all that great. I do think that clocks are stupid just b/c they don't use any talent they may have and put out crappy movie after crappy movie, but ur animation wasn't all that complicated, and it was full of BLIND hate. Good job compressing the sound though. Please teach other ppl how to do that.

it looks good...

but i always blam previews.

...

I'll try not to repeat too much of what other people said. I think it shows real potential, and I'm very excited to see what you come up with next. I agree that the art could use some fixing up. Just try to eliminate any unnecessary lines. But you said that the next episode will have much better art, so that sounds good. The sound was great, but you need to compress it better (I assume that's why the file size was so large), so you lost a few points there. The plot seemed fine to me. Sure, it jumped around a bit, but lots of ppl do that, and I don't see any problem with it as long as I know who the characters are (which I did).

I'd say your best bet is to really take your time on the next one.

MurcurySword responds:

"I'd say your best bet is to really take your time on the next one."

Well I guess I'll hold off on promising 3 times that I'll have the next cartoon done before August. Thanks for the suggestion though, you're right about needing to take my time. Actually this submission probably would look better if I wasn't on the Flash MX 30-trial. Speaking of this cartoon...

Potential: After watching my own cartoon for a while, I think that this submition really only shows that I know how to work the basics of Flash.

Sound: It's a real bitch to compress this, and the BBS Forums do help, but I read a lot of different things like "wavs make the file bigger" or "use only MP3s"

Plot: Pssh. Right, who makes those anymore? What are these "plots"?

Artwork: To be honest I loath myslef for the first half of animatics in this cartoon. All hand drawn in the application, wavey lines, and lack of color. The "Re-rendered Carlo" was scanned in then converted to flash. (I hear a lot of people do this, I should have thought of it sooner)

Thanks for the honest review and I'll look into the compresion thing.

well...

with a bit fine tuning of your skills, and more patience for completing projects, dare i say u may b the next xiao xiao

Xrenity responds:

:O what an honour :)

Hello?? Is there any intelligent life out there?

DBZ wanna'be

Stick

Crap

you fucking piece of shit!!!

BLAM IT!!! it takes forever to load, then it has this fake preloader that is just part of the "movie" and it loops. and all u hear is some crap song. FUCK U!!

PSYCHOSUMMI responds:

sorry if u didnt like it

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