Score: 8

"Sound problem."

submission: Stick Death Arena

date: March 1, 2007

It's really well done. only problem i have with it is that the sound isn't synced properly. Try using the stream sync option if you haven't already.

Score: 8

"Good Job"

submission: DS Birth of an Island

date: February 4, 2007

It's kinda funny to see something educational on NG, but that's not a bad thing. I like it. Hope to see more of your stuff soon.

xxx V

Score: 5

"You show talent"

submission: Ghost Recon Style Short

date: May 11, 2006

While you do show great talent with this Flash, I'm not quite sure what the point of your cartoon is. I would make it longer, and include the basic components of a story. Shorts are fine, but you can't ignore the story just because you're making one.

But other than that, the graphics are great.

Score: 8

"Good, but really not the best"

submission: Surface

date: June 23, 2005

It's good to see a drama become this popular on NG. This is an awesome concept, and it's easy to see how much you guys really care about and put into this project. However, some of the writing gets a bit slow. Like, ok, I get it, his heart is a dustless mirror. Ok. Overall, I really like this, and can't wait to see more. I'd just recommend a little work on the writing. Take out anything that isn't necessary to the story, everything should be essential to understanding the characters as actual complex people and the story as an actual complex situation. No wasted words allowed ;-P.

Great job. Good luck with the rest of it.

Score: 5

"Nice Work"

submission: -random fuck x2000-

date: August 13, 2004

Although it's really been done before, I think this still shows talent. The blue gradient for the sky was well used, and the setup of the stage was pretty nice (could have been better though, some spikes or something maybe). The animation itself was pretty smooth. The sound was great. Good job on the music. Next time you use some of your own music, I reccomend you put it into the AP and use a credits link to it. You'll get more downloads and reviews that way. I haven't checked out your other work yet, but I hope you do some more complex and original stuff in the future.

Score: 8

"Great"

submission: TechNinja Ep. 1

date: July 27, 2004

The art is amazing, and the story is intriguing. I can't wait until more of the story is revealed in the next episode. Most of the animation is smooth, although the throat-slit could have been enhanced, but it wasn't bad. It's great to see you doing something this good.

Can't wait to see more.

Score: 2

"really not worth anything"

submission: Eater of Houses

date: July 27, 2004

there's not much animation, the art is... bad. One of the things that really bugs me is when it is made blatantly obvioous how little the author put into it. At one point the corner of the pic of the monster is revealed, which aggrivates my pet-peeve. I like the concept actually. I think that if it were taken today and a good artist put a lot of effort into it, it could be good, as long as it is done in a way in which it will be taken symbolically that is.

Score: 5

"not that funny"

submission: Barney Vibe

date: July 27, 2004

the dildo jokes were funny the first time. You pretty much just used the same exact joke the original did. The art isn't horrendous, but not too interesting. That sound the buttons make gets annoying too.

Score: 7

"awesome"

submission: Scorpio Mercenary Group

date: July 27, 2004

this is truly the first of it's kind. I love the dildo jokes, i love the choices offered. I think the humor is great, the art is pretty damn good, and it's WAY ahead of it's time. This is by far on of my favorite NG classics. If it were submitted today, I would ask for more audio/voice work.

Score: 2

"nothing too fantastic"

submission: Superman

date: July 26, 2004

there's really not much to like in thi one. It's an ok concept, not really any original art by the author, and basic tweens were all the appearant animation (except for his cape in the beginning).